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Another New Story: The Old Box

                                                                        The Old Box

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by D.F. Rucci

I knew an old man, who lived in an old cabin. He would sit on his old chair, and think of the old days. His hair was gray, and his eyes were old and wise yet cold. For as each day came by, the blue in his pupils grew weary and gray. When he grew tired of sitting on his old chair, on the old porch which barely hung from the front of the cabin, he would bring himself inside it’s old frame.  The cabin was bare, as bare and cold as his lonely heart, nothing stood in its wall besides a small table, and an old box.

The box was made of wood and metal, and looked like a chest. For as long as the old man could remember, he remembered the box as something so valuable, so precious that he may never open it. He grew curious and he grew stubborn and he would trail his fingers over it’s course exterior, dreaming of what could be inside. His eyes would swell and his old fingers would fumble for its padlock, but he would never open it. It was forbidden to open the box, for the box was as old and weary as he was.

Times came slow, and slower as the winters take grasp of the forests around his cabin, keeping him from his old chair, on the old porch. Times like these he would find himself staring at the box, always staring at the box, for the box was ancient and wise and it was his box after all. When he would get especially lonely and bored he would polish his father’s old Winchester, careful as to avoid the deep red stains on it’s barrel. Such a thing was important, such a thing was there to remind him of the past, but he couldn’t remember. Didn’t want to remember after all, but he did want to know what was in that box.  Always what was in that box.

Sometimes at night, when he would lay on the old floor in his old cabin, he had dreams; rather nightmares that kept him awake most of the night. He thought of a young girl most of the time, he didn’t remember if he had known her or maybe he had just made her up, but she kept him up most of the time.  Whatever she was, she made him sad, bringing old tears to his old eyes, and still couldn’t recall anything. But whenever he thought of her, he thought of the Winchester and he wept. This never perplexed or confused him so to say, for it was the way it had always been, and once he grew disheartened he would forget soon after, most of the time anyway.

It happened one night after he had spent most of the time in his own old thoughts, that he stumbled over to the old table, which held the old box. With reddened eyes and trembling hands he shook the box and he yelled.  Cursing it, cursing whatever it held. His old voice quivered and he shook it with violent strength until the padlock broke free from the old box spilling it’s insides over the old table:

A pink ribbon, a gold ring, and a photo of a young boy and girl lay on the old table.  The Winchester cried out and the old man found peace.

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Sorrows of the draft

Welp, if you’ve been following this blog over the last week you’ll notice that I mentioned I would post another story in the series. That’s where this post begins, I have gone back and edited the draft time and time again, but I still am not pleased. I have gone back and am now in the process of redrafting the series keeping Vinnie as the protagonist while introducing other worthwhile characters. I’ve been working on a way to launch it properly and effectively so that is why it has been delayed three times now :P

Each story will be published 7pm on Tuesday every week. That following weekend I will be posting an audio version with full narration and sound effects for everyone. This will be a big project and I am doing my best to make it amazing. Tomorrow I will publish the sequel to Unlucky 7s, it is called Bullet from a Gravestone, and it will be a three part story. So that means that two stories will be up this week! Also tomorrow, I will shed more light on the series and will launch its own page on The Gray Pen.

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Flash Fic – Demons

Just a piece of flash fiction featuring the cast from first first installment of the new webseries. You can read that here, Unlucky 7s. Sunday I will be posting the sequel to the story, and will be revealing more of the story as a whole. Hope you enjoy the read :)  

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“What was in the bag Tommy?” The detectives voice cooed easily to the little boy who sat across the aluminum table; he must have been no older than five. The boy merely shrugged and kept his brown eyes glued to his lap.

“It’s okay to talk to me, I’m a police officer. I’m a good guy,” He formed a plastic grin and slid his golden badge to the boy. The child looked up from his lap to the badge and gave an unsure tilt of his head before he creeped for it. “Go ahead, you can touch it, it’s real.” He spoke slow, and the boy took no time for it to settle before he seized it in his tiny pale hands; thumbing it over as if it were diamonds. Continue reading


Unlucky 7s – Short Story

Hello all, yesterday I posted a piece of flash fiction, 2012. Today I’ve decided to post a short story featuring a certain detective who will be making an appearance in more short stories of mine. Next Wednesday I will be posting the “sequel” to this story and so on and so forth. Pardon any small errors, I’ve only had the chance to revise once. If you like, click the share buttons below to share it with more people :) ! Hope you enjoy the read

The sky broke open into a sea of rain splashing across the city now dark with the oncoming winter months looming in the threshold of autumn. Lightning escaped from the malevolent clouds; its light catching the reflections of a thousand windowpanes shaking with the thunder of the storm. The people of New York City hurried out of the busy streets; cars honked and an Italian cab driver barked out not-so-pleasant words at the idiot in the Honda who apparently didn’t know the difference between the gas and brake pedals. It was a typical Friday afternoon in the Big Apple, save the immense rains that threatened to sweep away the hordes of yellow taxis, beeping and steadily racking up the pay-rate for the miserable city folk.

Yet several hundred feet away, in an alleyway intersecting 92nd street, something not so typical was happening. Four squad cars and a thick black Lincoln were blocking one of the exits and the officers stood in a semi-circle gazing at the body; no, the corpse of the young woman before them. Once pretty, but now she lay a macabre mess of blood and mutilation. Detective Vincent Gambini stood tall in a trench coat, his hands buried deep inside.

“What do we have here?” His voice came husky, and he retrived a cigarette from his pocket placing it in his lips. “ID?” Vinnie asked one of the officers who was busying himself with preserving the crime scene.  Continue reading